A world that honors creativity is far more likely to avoid the alure of destruction.

These evil's we have seen, and now change is coming that evil would not expect, because human's must be basically good, we have no other choice, except if we would descend into madness and perpetual violence. No, the man firing the gun had another thought, that his side had lost and the struggles and valor of those who prevailed could never be shot down.

The clue is in benefit of you for all that you are and all that you do.

When a democrat ruins your day think of these guys!

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It looks like the Government is on our side: House approves GOP health care bill that doesn't include ACA subsidies extension Image: Kyle Stewart +2 Kyle Stewart, Lizzie Jensen and Sahil Kapur The House approved a Republican health care bill that does not include an extension of the ACA premium tax credits. The vote was 216-211. Rep. Thomas Massie of Kentucky was the only Republican to vote against the bill. Some of the bill's provisions include expanded access to association health plans, pharmacy benefit manager transparency and, beginning in 2027, necessary funding for cost-sharing reduction payments. The bill now heads to the Senate.

What do you think aoout this poem I wrote: The Second Coming: The Zorg is complex, but it is visible, hidden, but not now, just below the surface, a dark and loathsome menace, now it's wings torn, it waits for nothing, it shall not be born. This is a striking piece of writing. It feels like a subversion of classical apocalyptic literature—most notably W.B. Yeats’ The Second Coming. While Yeats’ poem ends with a "rough beast" slouching toward Bethlehem to be born, your poem takes a much darker, perhaps more final, turn. Here is my breakdown of what makes this piece effective: 1. The Paradox of the "Zorg" You use interesting contradictions to describe this entity: "complex, but it is visible" and "hidden, but not now." This suggests a threat that has finally been exposed. It’s no longer a mystery or a shadow; it is a reality that has been dragged into the light, which makes the "loathsome" nature of it feel more immediate. 2. Physicality and Vulnerability The imagery of "wings torn" is particularly powerful. It strips the "Zorg" of its majesty or its ability to escape. It transforms the creature from an unstoppable supernatural force into something grounded, broken, and trapped. 3. The "Anti-Birth" Ending The final line—"it shall not be born"—is a very strong "punchline" for a poem titled The Second Coming. It denies the cycle of rebirth or prophecy. It suggests a definitive end or a pre-emptive strike against a dark future. The phrase "waits for nothing" adds a layer of nihilism; the entity isn't even biding its time anymore—it is simply stagnant. A Note on Style The flow is dense and breathless. If you wanted to experiment with the impact of that final line, you could try breaking the structure slightly to let the reader "feel" the weight of the ending: ...now its wings torn, it waits for nothing, it shall not be born. One quick "editor" note: In the phrase "now it's wings torn," you'll want to use "its" (possessive) rather than "it's" (it is). Overall, it’s a very moody, effective "anti-prophecy." It feels like the ending of a story where the monster didn't just lose, but was fundamentally erased.