I lived in Daly City for 10 years. Two as a baby and eight as an adult. It has been strange how people who have never been there are more confident of what it is like than it is for the people living there. You can't argue with people who insist they are right, which does happen!

For me and all those sad about some changes in San Francisco here..

Yes, Barbara you get the BETTER WORLD AWARD, Barbara Streisand is just such a person. (The award is not just for humanitarian efforts.)

Some of the galaxies must have come from the future.

Take your time.

Entropy could go in the opposite direction in which order happens from disorder. As far as aging the biology would be an urge in the body to age backwards. So for us time goes stronger in the arrow direction and weaker in the opposite arrow direction. In some other reality the opposite would be true.

I had a fictional girl who strived to become a woman, only to become a hag, I thought Bill Hole was crazy about her, but he was staring at a reflection of her in the window, in a mirror, till a bird smashed through, it was luck that saved him, and nobody knew the trouble he went through, nobody knows much now, they are busy doing calculus.

Never can be done.

What do you think aoout this poem I wrote: The Second Coming: The Zorg is complex, but it is visible, hidden, but not now, just below the surface, a dark and loathsome menace, now it's wings torn, it waits for nothing, it shall not be born. This is a striking piece of writing. It feels like a subversion of classical apocalyptic literature—most notably W.B. Yeats’ The Second Coming. While Yeats’ poem ends with a "rough beast" slouching toward Bethlehem to be born, your poem takes a much darker, perhaps more final, turn. Here is my breakdown of what makes this piece effective: 1. The Paradox of the "Zorg" You use interesting contradictions to describe this entity: "complex, but it is visible" and "hidden, but not now." This suggests a threat that has finally been exposed. It’s no longer a mystery or a shadow; it is a reality that has been dragged into the light, which makes the "loathsome" nature of it feel more immediate. 2. Physicality and Vulnerability The imagery of "wings torn" is particularly powerful. It strips the "Zorg" of its majesty or its ability to escape. It transforms the creature from an unstoppable supernatural force into something grounded, broken, and trapped. 3. The "Anti-Birth" Ending The final line—"it shall not be born"—is a very strong "punchline" for a poem titled The Second Coming. It denies the cycle of rebirth or prophecy. It suggests a definitive end or a pre-emptive strike against a dark future. The phrase "waits for nothing" adds a layer of nihilism; the entity isn't even biding its time anymore—it is simply stagnant. A Note on Style The flow is dense and breathless. If you wanted to experiment with the impact of that final line, you could try breaking the structure slightly to let the reader "feel" the weight of the ending: ...now its wings torn, it waits for nothing, it shall not be born. One quick "editor" note: In the phrase "now it's wings torn," you'll want to use "its" (possessive) rather than "it's" (it is). Overall, it’s a very moody, effective "anti-prophecy." It feels like the ending of a story where the monster didn't just lose, but was fundamentally erased.