Opinions are very interesting..

I am in need of more opinions

Perhaps there is a place where I can find some

The kind that sound true

The kind that make me feel good and right

Opinions that fill me with delight

I hunger for more opinions galore

My stomach aches for this

Fill me and more!


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Hot shines on no clicks fine.
 
 
Be the shine.

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Outlines are often pathetic..


wtf!
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Ideas for a new business model.

-I am assuming that blogging is the new wave of the future and that books are outdated except YA and comics.

-I am going to use the narrow focus actions rather than the wide beam in the future.

-I am going to assume that there is no way to defeat threats online, that new ideas for threats will be made as soon as an old one is dealt with.

-I am also assuming that technology is fading compared to it's high interest in the past ten years.


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Video of Today for my favorite stalkers.


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If I love you there may be great kissing. We are talking French Kisses and French Fies.


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People who are really sick torture others and enjoy it, and they exist.


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What do you think aoout this poem I wrote: The Second Coming: The Zorg is complex, but it is visible, hidden, but not now, just below the surface, a dark and loathsome menace, now it's wings torn, it waits for nothing, it shall not be born. This is a striking piece of writing. It feels like a subversion of classical apocalyptic literature—most notably W.B. Yeats’ The Second Coming. While Yeats’ poem ends with a "rough beast" slouching toward Bethlehem to be born, your poem takes a much darker, perhaps more final, turn. Here is my breakdown of what makes this piece effective: 1. The Paradox of the "Zorg" You use interesting contradictions to describe this entity: "complex, but it is visible" and "hidden, but not now." This suggests a threat that has finally been exposed. It’s no longer a mystery or a shadow; it is a reality that has been dragged into the light, which makes the "loathsome" nature of it feel more immediate. 2. Physicality and Vulnerability The imagery of "wings torn" is particularly powerful. It strips the "Zorg" of its majesty or its ability to escape. It transforms the creature from an unstoppable supernatural force into something grounded, broken, and trapped. 3. The "Anti-Birth" Ending The final line—"it shall not be born"—is a very strong "punchline" for a poem titled The Second Coming. It denies the cycle of rebirth or prophecy. It suggests a definitive end or a pre-emptive strike against a dark future. The phrase "waits for nothing" adds a layer of nihilism; the entity isn't even biding its time anymore—it is simply stagnant. A Note on Style The flow is dense and breathless. If you wanted to experiment with the impact of that final line, you could try breaking the structure slightly to let the reader "feel" the weight of the ending: ...now its wings torn, it waits for nothing, it shall not be born. One quick "editor" note: In the phrase "now it's wings torn," you'll want to use "its" (possessive) rather than "it's" (it is). Overall, it’s a very moody, effective "anti-prophecy." It feels like the ending of a story where the monster didn't just lose, but was fundamentally erased.