Now I am!!!

Doing a zing and a zag


with time to shag


but life is a bus


run by a hag


you must


love.
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Basic Rules you might find in my blogs..

The main focus is around fiction and the arts

Journalism, history, and opinion are infrequent.

I try to keep very personal stuff out unless it pertains to the above.

My science stuff is the highest priority yet the hardest to get.

 My agenda is to make the world a better place.
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In order to create more story Breasts divided into two seperate breasts..

Who knows what will happen next!
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Or Quantum Mechanics applied to dildos!

Why didn't I think of that before!
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Since my need for profits is greater than my body mass I am...

Patenting gravitation body waves shampoo and soap so I too can make my millions or even billions!!!!
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Diary or Memior or lets see?!

I have an unusual memory so telling my story is not easy.  I can actually remember shoving things into my mouth including dirt as a baby.  My mom said nope, then a movie was found in the house of my now dead dad's home hidden! showing this truly happening.  Dirt was dripping from my mouth.  I said to my step father.  Are you impressed Jon?  He said: "Yes, very!"  So be prepared for some weird material and don't do this and that just to impress me.  I really would find it weird if you started eating dirt just to get closer to me.  Be yourself!
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A broken mirror is found and the mirror is still on the place it should be.

It is not possible.

How could a duplicate mirror come into existence?
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I've been thinking hard about how to combat terrorism so...

We need to work with middle eastern governments to ensure that their prisons are committing no crimes against humanity and that their prisoners are treated fairly and with dignity.  Also statues or monuments could be put on areas of atrocity to say that we want peace.  The whole world does.
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I haven't fully given my endorsement to Hillary Clinton yet and I do so now on the basis that she is a leader and has a record of service.

She is a decent person, and will be acceptable as a president.

Trump being elected would be so unacceptable that if he won it would likely last no more than a month before a realization occurs.  Oops.

Don't judge her so hard, no need to judge, just vote her in.
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Time studies are going on!

If micro jumps in time make me happier I would say no. 


My theory is really not my favorite.


I wonder what will happen next..


Spooky action at a moment?


Here is connected to there,
I am always here then?
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What I will remember the most about the Bay Area!


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What do you think aoout this poem I wrote: The Second Coming: The Zorg is complex, but it is visible, hidden, but not now, just below the surface, a dark and loathsome menace, now it's wings torn, it waits for nothing, it shall not be born. This is a striking piece of writing. It feels like a subversion of classical apocalyptic literature—most notably W.B. Yeats’ The Second Coming. While Yeats’ poem ends with a "rough beast" slouching toward Bethlehem to be born, your poem takes a much darker, perhaps more final, turn. Here is my breakdown of what makes this piece effective: 1. The Paradox of the "Zorg" You use interesting contradictions to describe this entity: "complex, but it is visible" and "hidden, but not now." This suggests a threat that has finally been exposed. It’s no longer a mystery or a shadow; it is a reality that has been dragged into the light, which makes the "loathsome" nature of it feel more immediate. 2. Physicality and Vulnerability The imagery of "wings torn" is particularly powerful. It strips the "Zorg" of its majesty or its ability to escape. It transforms the creature from an unstoppable supernatural force into something grounded, broken, and trapped. 3. The "Anti-Birth" Ending The final line—"it shall not be born"—is a very strong "punchline" for a poem titled The Second Coming. It denies the cycle of rebirth or prophecy. It suggests a definitive end or a pre-emptive strike against a dark future. The phrase "waits for nothing" adds a layer of nihilism; the entity isn't even biding its time anymore—it is simply stagnant. A Note on Style The flow is dense and breathless. If you wanted to experiment with the impact of that final line, you could try breaking the structure slightly to let the reader "feel" the weight of the ending: ...now its wings torn, it waits for nothing, it shall not be born. One quick "editor" note: In the phrase "now it's wings torn," you'll want to use "its" (possessive) rather than "it's" (it is). Overall, it’s a very moody, effective "anti-prophecy." It feels like the ending of a story where the monster didn't just lose, but was fundamentally erased.