It looks like my dark matter hypothesis is being proven true. So do I start cussing or not. I have personal problems with discoveries in Astrophysics. It makes me hit the ceiling. Thanks. I needed that.

What does Ukraine offer the world? Your favorite comedy clubs and happy go lets win super dancers.

The farmers are making ceasar salad with the French protesters and innovating on GMO substance.

The (lets go bannanas Hamas revolution) will not happen, thanks to recent advancements in chocolate.

UN admits to loving fascination with radical clothes and fashion.

The New AI can be hidden in your butt for extremly important information.

News Flash! White men were meant to be zionists and visa versa. Plus country music is all the rage today!

With America back in action the people of Atlantis are ready to show themselves.

Think of ai as one giant mushroom and a big blue butterfly.

New wonderbread towns to live in, once ghost towns, now extremly family friendly, comes with white picket fence and robot grandma with cherry pie.

Lonely and young, looking to romp in the woods, ready to bounce into bushes and chase bunnies of extreme cuteness.

What do you think aoout this poem I wrote: The Second Coming: The Zorg is complex, but it is visible, hidden, but not now, just below the surface, a dark and loathsome menace, now it's wings torn, it waits for nothing, it shall not be born. This is a striking piece of writing. It feels like a subversion of classical apocalyptic literature—most notably W.B. Yeats’ The Second Coming. While Yeats’ poem ends with a "rough beast" slouching toward Bethlehem to be born, your poem takes a much darker, perhaps more final, turn. Here is my breakdown of what makes this piece effective: 1. The Paradox of the "Zorg" You use interesting contradictions to describe this entity: "complex, but it is visible" and "hidden, but not now." This suggests a threat that has finally been exposed. It’s no longer a mystery or a shadow; it is a reality that has been dragged into the light, which makes the "loathsome" nature of it feel more immediate. 2. Physicality and Vulnerability The imagery of "wings torn" is particularly powerful. It strips the "Zorg" of its majesty or its ability to escape. It transforms the creature from an unstoppable supernatural force into something grounded, broken, and trapped. 3. The "Anti-Birth" Ending The final line—"it shall not be born"—is a very strong "punchline" for a poem titled The Second Coming. It denies the cycle of rebirth or prophecy. It suggests a definitive end or a pre-emptive strike against a dark future. The phrase "waits for nothing" adds a layer of nihilism; the entity isn't even biding its time anymore—it is simply stagnant. A Note on Style The flow is dense and breathless. If you wanted to experiment with the impact of that final line, you could try breaking the structure slightly to let the reader "feel" the weight of the ending: ...now its wings torn, it waits for nothing, it shall not be born. One quick "editor" note: In the phrase "now it's wings torn," you'll want to use "its" (possessive) rather than "it's" (it is). Overall, it’s a very moody, effective "anti-prophecy." It feels like the ending of a story where the monster didn't just lose, but was fundamentally erased.