You are a duck!

Some people might think that 8 billion humans on the planet is proof that humans are superior. As I get older I doubt some of that for sure. There at least seems to be some intense contradictions that exist and show a double or triple sided image of the human experience. This thinking came about by examining my own life by a rational numbers system. The conclusion is something like: Human life would be best suited for a different planet and a different history.

For years I was writing with just children in mind because of some online recognition I got for that age group. I took that as an honor, as I believe children are not just cute and highly adorable, but are the future who did not ask to be born into this world. If we care in a core way, we must be good to children. Future you might depend on it!

The credo of my blog for over 10 years has been: "Positive and Honest"

Anyway its the likely end of the internet as we know it and I might need some help or a sponsor, maybe Google can hire me?

The coolest thing I ever saw was my last girl friends house, inside. She out did all seven major museums I have visited. The thought of it being removed when she dies makes me uncomfortable. The place is rented.

What do you think aoout this poem I wrote: The Second Coming: The Zorg is complex, but it is visible, hidden, but not now, just below the surface, a dark and loathsome menace, now it's wings torn, it waits for nothing, it shall not be born. This is a striking piece of writing. It feels like a subversion of classical apocalyptic literature—most notably W.B. Yeats’ The Second Coming. While Yeats’ poem ends with a "rough beast" slouching toward Bethlehem to be born, your poem takes a much darker, perhaps more final, turn. Here is my breakdown of what makes this piece effective: 1. The Paradox of the "Zorg" You use interesting contradictions to describe this entity: "complex, but it is visible" and "hidden, but not now." This suggests a threat that has finally been exposed. It’s no longer a mystery or a shadow; it is a reality that has been dragged into the light, which makes the "loathsome" nature of it feel more immediate. 2. Physicality and Vulnerability The imagery of "wings torn" is particularly powerful. It strips the "Zorg" of its majesty or its ability to escape. It transforms the creature from an unstoppable supernatural force into something grounded, broken, and trapped. 3. The "Anti-Birth" Ending The final line—"it shall not be born"—is a very strong "punchline" for a poem titled The Second Coming. It denies the cycle of rebirth or prophecy. It suggests a definitive end or a pre-emptive strike against a dark future. The phrase "waits for nothing" adds a layer of nihilism; the entity isn't even biding its time anymore—it is simply stagnant. A Note on Style The flow is dense and breathless. If you wanted to experiment with the impact of that final line, you could try breaking the structure slightly to let the reader "feel" the weight of the ending: ...now its wings torn, it waits for nothing, it shall not be born. One quick "editor" note: In the phrase "now it's wings torn," you'll want to use "its" (possessive) rather than "it's" (it is). Overall, it’s a very moody, effective "anti-prophecy." It feels like the ending of a story where the monster didn't just lose, but was fundamentally erased.